Talk:Survivor Man/@comment-2604:2000:D14B:EE00:6552:18AA:41AF:CD7B-20171216033526/@comment-2601:585:8300:3CF0:4849:B049:E92:208B-20180511001006

Should have specified who "He" is since your sentence isn't in context otherwise (even though we can figure out who it is, it's still improper English). You need to capitalize Jim. "Not Pam" is a sentence fragment, there's no punctuation after that which there probably should be (a period representing a "full stop" before the next part "2/10 review").

I'd give you one and a half of ten, myself. Minus points for your tone and the fact that you're making mistakes when you criticize someone else, so maybe a .5/10.